tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post5646190307526364091..comments2023-06-22T05:09:43.422-04:00Comments on LolliPop's Cottage: Campaigner Challenge 200-Word Short FictionMaeve Frazierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-12560720322495517842011-09-16T23:03:56.841-04:002011-09-16T23:03:56.841-04:00I got the feeling she was getting the axe at work....I got the feeling she was getting the axe at work. Tell me, tell me, TELL ME! My curiosity is piqued. Good job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-7743073324522747582011-09-14T12:12:21.047-04:002011-09-14T12:12:21.047-04:00Hello from another campaigner! Had to come here af...Hello from another campaigner! Had to come here after you commented on my 9/11 poem, which took me even longer than my flash fiction entry. I can't help wondering if your shop owner? employee? is on her own due to death or divorce. Sad. But I loved how you became Lolli! Very Punny! Like how I share my heart in my pun name. Now following.Sher A. Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03067955594103356768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-82597106620700076182011-09-11T20:42:46.061-04:002011-09-11T20:42:46.061-04:00Great job packing emotion and intrigue into your 2...Great job packing emotion and intrigue into your 200 words, Maeve. Congrats!Dora Hiershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00776046195295470466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-47017951844355994982011-09-10T16:32:51.471-04:002011-09-10T16:32:51.471-04:00"I will not let him make me cry" broke m..."I will not let him make me cry" broke my heart, and then the reflection of two... wonderful!Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-42971989225029786452011-09-10T12:49:55.726-04:002011-09-10T12:49:55.726-04:00Very nice & very sad. I wanted to know what s...Very nice & very sad. I wanted to know what she would do next. ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-84957375340182582792011-09-10T11:23:30.047-04:002011-09-10T11:23:30.047-04:00Amanda - Thank you! You imagined correctly!!
S...Amanda - Thank you! You imagined correctly!! <br /><br />Susanna - :) Thank you!<br /><br />Richard - Definitely!<br /><br />Kirsten - Thanks :)<br /><br />Elaine - Thanks :)<br /><br />Thank you everyone - I am having so much fun reading all of your stories.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-84770811380075755632011-09-10T10:56:15.038-04:002011-09-10T10:56:15.038-04:00Poor girl, I'm not sure what is causing it but...Poor girl, I'm not sure what is causing it but her pain is so palpable. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-10665748030941636462011-09-10T09:36:48.298-04:002011-09-10T09:36:48.298-04:00Nice. I like the way you ended it.Nice. I like the way you ended it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-55808969334728190462011-09-10T08:40:37.246-04:002011-09-10T08:40:37.246-04:00Haven't we all felt that way at one time or an...Haven't we all felt that way at one time or another?writing and living by Richard P Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814139767151989286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-56343664883857130492011-09-09T13:00:53.801-04:002011-09-09T13:00:53.801-04:00Great tension! i don't know exactly what'...Great tension! i don't know exactly what's going to happen to Nia in that office, but it sure doesn't sound good!Susanna Leonard Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655630528649780363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-68312095525339192642011-09-09T02:37:13.622-04:002011-09-09T02:37:13.622-04:00Your story left me needing more. :) Lots of questi...Your story left me needing more. :) Lots of questions I want answered. Why was she pitied and what was she doing with this man that could make her cry?? The menacing atmosphere at the end when she saw their reflection was perfect. Something bad was about to go down, well at least that's how I imagined it. ;)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-91415632468426416672011-09-08T10:29:42.276-04:002011-09-08T10:29:42.276-04:00Susie - Thank you!
Angela - Thank you, it was my ...Susie - Thank you!<br /><br />Angela - Thank you, it was my pleasure!<br /><br />Candy - Thanks for your comments.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-23051379396543187672011-09-07T23:02:05.793-04:002011-09-07T23:02:05.793-04:00Loving the image of the "airless" and du...Loving the image of the "airless" and dusty room. My nose itches just reading your story. Provoking.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-57639872603358556262011-09-07T18:14:47.031-04:002011-09-07T18:14:47.031-04:00Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting, Mae...Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting, Maeve! :-)Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-38686197745829562392011-09-07T17:35:58.364-04:002011-09-07T17:35:58.364-04:00Really gripping - and thought provoking. I wanted ...Really gripping - and thought provoking. I wanted to know whta happened next!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06150396615203179461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-62392647197754294112011-09-07T06:18:24.484-04:002011-09-07T06:18:24.484-04:00Tara - Thank you. I am excited and nervous about ...Tara - Thank you. I am excited and nervous about round 2.<br /><br />Angela - Thank you. I'll be by.<br /><br />Ron - I'm looking forward to reading yours.<br /><br />Doreen - It is amazing how many stories are coming out of those two short lines.<br /><br />Isis - Thank you.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-58054518009644539052011-09-07T06:15:18.829-04:002011-09-07T06:15:18.829-04:00Christine R. & Christine F. - Thank you both.
...Christine R. & Christine F. - Thank you both.<br /><br />Doralynn - Hmmn, No, but I like that idea.<br /><br />Stacy - Thank you and so exciting!<br /><br />Cortney - Thank you.<br /><br />Bridget - I am enjoying reading everyone else's short fiction posts.<br /><br />David - Thank you. :)<br /><br />Theresa - Now if I can have all the answers :)Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-52447853191445365842011-09-07T03:36:54.511-04:002011-09-07T03:36:54.511-04:00I really felt her pain. Great job at making me wan...I really felt her pain. Great job at making me want to know more.Isis Rushdanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773053495985834484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-16562244899828573212011-09-07T02:30:28.319-04:002011-09-07T02:30:28.319-04:00All of these pieces are SO different. I really wa...All of these pieces are SO different. I really wanted to know what happened next..Doreenhttp://www.doreenmcgettigan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-81265975788704277742011-09-06T22:33:53.539-04:002011-09-06T22:33:53.539-04:00Interesting and draws you in. I still have to writ...Interesting and draws you in. I still have to write mine!Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-73252369811413070482011-09-06T19:45:01.291-04:002011-09-06T19:45:01.291-04:00I connected with your female character right away....I connected with your female character right away. Felt her pain and wondered what exactly had happened? <br /><br />I'm in the Campaign as well - #76 :-)Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-71163784001439891922011-09-06T18:43:33.330-04:002011-09-06T18:43:33.330-04:00really feel for her! what could be wrong?
and way ...really feel for her! what could be wrong?<br />and way to go to the 2nd round!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-27681430555597802572011-09-06T16:38:15.485-04:002011-09-06T16:38:15.485-04:00You definitely raised a lot of questions. Who is ...You definitely raised a lot of questions. Who is he? What's wrong with her? Why is she on her own? I'm intrigued!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-78460437741290816732011-09-06T16:11:37.805-04:002011-09-06T16:11:37.805-04:00You ended that on an awesome, even chilling note. ...You ended that on an awesome, even chilling note. Chilled me, anyway. Reflections do that. Great work, Maeve! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2753417071794109197.post-36573718318622652332011-09-06T00:32:59.721-04:002011-09-06T00:32:59.721-04:00Icould feel her pain. I'm loving all the diffe...Icould feel her pain. I'm loving all the different stories. I'm #72bridgethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01553619856059414447noreply@blogger.com